Overall, good start Thomas. You need to find a better quality image for your background for your website, it is too blurry and impacts on the quality of your work. Carefully consider what else you could add to the homepage, at present it looks like it needs further points of interest. Your article on Thomas at the end claims the article continues on the next page, this would not happen on a website; unless you have proof. Your Imagine Dragons article, your text has too many gaps in the lines, please amend, your placement of sub images as discussed before needs to be amended, perhaps create a collage with overlapping images???
Overall, good start Thomas. You need to find a better quality image for your background for your website, it is too blurry and impacts on the quality of your work. Carefully consider what else you could add to the homepage, at present it looks like it needs further points of interest. Your article on Thomas at the end claims the article continues on the next page, this would not happen on a website; unless you have proof. Your Imagine Dragons article, your text has too many gaps in the lines, please amend, your placement of sub images as discussed before needs to be amended, perhaps create a collage with overlapping images???
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